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unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Consonanta » Thu Dec 15, 2016 12:14 am

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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Blu » Sat Dec 17, 2016 6:28 am

Her center of gravity seems off, like she's falling over to [our] left. I'd suggest moving [her] left leg inwards to help balance her. Her legs also seem off proportion-wise, to me. A little too small, but that could be a matter of opinion.

Otherwise, she looks really cool! I love the movement you've got with the flames and her hair.
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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Dragyn » Sat Dec 17, 2016 3:08 pm

I'm bad with CC at this point, but I love the idea! Woo!

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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Phoenigette » Mon Dec 19, 2016 2:30 pm

I officially have to find some excuse to make that outfit. I have to.

The pose is a little bit off balance, as blue said, but i find it to be not quite enough to be in motion but not quite still enough to make it look like she has her feet firmly planted. You could either do as blue suggested and plant her more firmly, or have her bent leg be slightly raised more on the toes to exaggerate the motion.

I do find her legs to be a little thin for my taste. I like her slight bosom, but think she could have more calf and thigh. That's pretty stylistic though.
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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Consonanta » Mon Dec 19, 2016 11:23 pm

Thank you, dear friends! I have made some adjustments based on your suggestions, and I will hopefully begin on the shading from this point onward. The light source will no doubt be intimidating, but I shall try. :?
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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by Consonanta » Fri Dec 23, 2016 7:01 pm

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At last, I am finished! I wish I could have taken the lighting further, but I had to be mindful of the deadline. :shock:

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Re: unfashionably late, as usual

Post by paperraine » Sat Dec 24, 2016 9:48 am

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