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DONE! I think?

Post by Serawr! » Sat May 09, 2009 11:55 am

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So, Im trying to stick with the general design. Changed a few things. The kite's bein her necklace atm; but Im still iffy about stuff.
Like her hair xP I love her dress and capris though; and shoes oddly enuff, so theyre staying.
Any CC or suggestions would be loved. Thanks! <3

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I hate doing poofs. CC now is appreciated, mainly the kites, the waist bow, and her HAIR! WHY IS IT SO HARD NOW!?!? D'x


2nd LASt UPDATE IHOPE! D=
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Better at all? I didn't want to re-do the poof, and I added a small neckkalce.CC again, please. Harsh -_-

And yehs, Im going to make the hair strand-ey-er right now.

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I FINISHED! ithink>.>
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M actually proud of the poof n_n thanks everyone for the cc! <3

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Post by Blu » Sat May 09, 2009 5:26 pm

I think the kite needs to be a bit more obvious/part of the doll than just a pin/necklace... I'm not sure how you can add it in more, though. Maybe a background! With a blue sky and a kite flying in the background? The doll doesn't necessarily have to be interacting with the kite. I really love her dress, and I think adding a bow to her hair would be cute (even if it's just a small one). :3

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Post by Serawr! » Sun May 10, 2009 8:53 am

Yeh, I was originally iffy about the kite on the necklace too. I like your idea of a miny (sp?) background though. And Yeh I think I'll find a way to add the bow. I fail at em though xP I'll update this asap! <3
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Post by Serawr! » Wed Jun 03, 2009 5:42 pm

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Post by Lazzi » Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:04 pm

Ooo! I like the update! I'm especially liking the addition of green sleeves and her new hairstyle . . . it's really funky and modern, and it's a nice change from long hair (your original hairstyle looked great, I'm just saying that you see a lot of long hair in the dolling world). I think the kite background is nice (very watercolour-y), the shading on the dress is impeccable and the bow looks fine to me.

Suggestions: Have you tried adding back the kite necklace from the first attempt? Now that you have kites in the background, it doesn't matter if the necklace is distinguishable as a kite. Regardless if it is or isn't, I think it compliments the outfit quite nicely.

I think that going with sandals is a good move, but I think they need to look a bit more substantial . . . maybe an extra pixel width on the straps or a stronger looking sole.

As much as I like the new hairstyle, I think the part may be slightly off-center . . . it may need to move to the left (doll's right) juuuuust a tinge.

Good luck! :mrgreen:
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Post by Serawr! » Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:19 pm

<33 Ily thanks. That's exactly what I needed. I'll think about the necklace.. maybe a jewel diamond or something? And the hair, I'll redo. I wish someone would do a Poof tutorial x3 And I can easily fix the shoes, so thanks for that aswell! =D

But I'll do those things now. Thankyuuu! =3
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Post by Serawr! » Sun Jun 07, 2009 10:21 pm

REBUMP! Moar CC pleez?

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Post by slightly-caustic » Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:23 am

I think that the outfit and the kites look great. The side part in her hair might be going a bit far up into her hair line. Also, on the left side of her head the hair seems to be a bit akward at the top .. I dont know how to phrase that one ... so I drew you a pic of what I am thinking ...

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Post by Lazzi » Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:32 am

You know, I thought her poof hairdo (i.e. the second one) looked totally fine . . . it just needed some minor tweaking, if that.

If you get stuck on this third hairstyle, I can't see why you couldn't revert to it (or even the first one, for that matter).

Sandals look much better, methinks. Yay! :mrgreen:
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Post by Serawr! » Mon Jun 08, 2009 1:58 am

I know the poof looks better, style-wise but Im just really lousy at drawing them =p An
I guess I could re-try it, and fix my side part... then see which looks better?

And m glad the sandals are better n_n

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Post by Serawr! » Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:49 pm

Finished n3n

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Post by Cylli » Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:34 pm

Is she angry ?

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Post by Serawr! » Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:27 pm

Urgh, no. It's the base. =P Her eyebrows are like that. I sent her in anyways.
And can't yu see her smile D=
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