Erm.. halp? [UPDATE]

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Erm.. halp? [UPDATE]

Post by Adelle » Mon May 11, 2009 12:11 am

I shouldn't be allowed to post when I'm half asleep...

ANYWAY! I honestly don't know what to ask for CC for, but.. Posting so you guys can pick at it, since I'm sure I'm missing horrible ugly bits. I do that a lot. u_u

Anyway. I was assigned MythFreak, who specifically asked to keep the base curvy. Since I love to draw curvy ladies to begin with, and i can never seem to be able to do anything OTHER then make new bases (for everything I do. Ever. It's a sad, sad habit that's detrimental to my sanity. u_u ), I made a new base for it which you can find here if you're at all interested.

ANYWAY! I chose this doll out of the three I was given:
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I really love little dresses like that. And gingham patterns. Seemed like a natural choice. *shrug*

I wanted to step up the spring-ie theme a bit. And add a little playful attitude. This is what I have going so far:
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I have no idea what else to add. I wanted to do a few small details. Not a lot, though, because the dress will have a pattern and I don't want to take away from that. Maybe a necklace or bracelet or.. something. I have no idea.

The hair is supposed to be up in like a banana clip type style (i don't usually put outlines on hair when i pixel, but i did so you guys could at least get some idea of what the eff I'm doing. xD; ). Semi-fancy, semi-casual, allll cool! 8D

Ermm.. right. Besides that... I have no idea what else to say. If you find anything to CC on what I have, pleeeaaase do. But I don't know what to ask for, specially. u_u; Apart from what the hell else to add to it, that is. >_>;

Welp. That's all I can think of. Going to go pass out on my nice soft fluffy bed now. ILU GAIZ. 8D

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Post by Kitsune » Mon May 11, 2009 12:34 am

Ok, first let me say I love the dress, and the base it rocking. That said the only thing I would say is that maybe for the clip make it more like a claw or adjust the width of it? Also, I think the hair would probably fall back over it some if it's that length wouldn't it? I wish I could explain it better.

You've done a really good job with it so far though, I'm looking forward to seeing how it comes out!
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Post by Adelle » Mon May 11, 2009 2:01 pm

You're right -- top parts of her hair would be much more.. floppy, at that length. My hair is short, so it sticks straight up when i clip it back. *bad reference* XD;;

Claw clip would be much better, too. Hrm. I'll doodle it in, see what I can come up with. Those little teeth on it might kill me, however. XP

Thank you for the ideas and the C/C. x_x Like I said, I've been staring at it so long I've lost half the details. XD;
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Post by Kitsune » Mon May 11, 2009 3:52 pm

Oh good, I'm glad I could help some. :) Maybe this will help you with the clip, I hope you don't mind redlines? It's just a basic outline, but I hope it helps you some.

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Post by Helyn » Mon May 11, 2009 6:21 pm

Oh man, I love that base. That face is so rockin...I want to use it...

I think a necklace would be good. I'm picturing a fine chain with a chunky locket or something, smuggling in those big boobies. But I don't really picture her wearing bracelets or earrings, she doesn't seem that sort to me. I get a casual vibe from her.
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Post by Rami » Mon May 11, 2009 6:33 pm

I love how this is coming along.
But the folds seem to indicate that she is raising the dress more than she actually does...so...maybe lenghthen the part that she doesnt raise?

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Post by Blu » Mon May 11, 2009 9:33 pm

I think she should have freckles. ._.
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Post by Hollay » Tue May 12, 2009 1:39 am

I see she inherited your bewbeyz. D:

I love this though. The folds look amazing, and I really love the beady (not an insult!) eyes and the hairstyle. I do think adding a necklace or summin might add a little more.. detail or flair to her though. :3 Maybe one of those long necklaces with some pendant (I'll take a pic at home and post examples if ya need. I have a cool antique-y one that would look cool pixeled with this girl). :D

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Post by Polly Juice » Tue May 12, 2009 10:34 am

Since she's raising her skirt, I'd like to see a tattoo or something on her leg, as if she's raising the skirt to show off the tattoo. And since she looks kinda like a tough chick, I think a tattoo would suit her.

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Post by Adelle » Wed May 13, 2009 2:36 pm

fiahgklh Sorry guys! I had an attack of real life. Last minute plans for a trip to Canada before school starts. x_x

ANYWAY!

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So! I redid the hair-floppiness, and tried desperately to make a little claw clip. Kinda failed. But at least it's shiny? Er.. >_>;

Elongated parts of the dress, because it was horribly uneven (thank you Rami, i never would have noticed that. XD; )

Erm.. added in that necklace. it's -supposed- to be one of those 'cameo' lockets.. Not sure if you can really tell. Woe. u_u

And then, of course, hair is shaded, and the dress has basic shading. And the shadow under the dress on her legs.

What i haven't done is the tattoo and the freckles. I played with the tattoo idea, but i just couldn't come up with anything. XD;; Every thing I came up with was either too gaudy or too big. or not big enough. So.. i gave up. u_u

Freckles I just haven't even attempted yet. I'm afraid they're take away from her face. So I'm thinking maybe a few birthmarks here and there? Not just on her face, but her chest or something. I dunno.

Erm... lesse.. I can't think of anything else besides that. u_u
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Post by Blu » Wed May 13, 2009 6:00 pm

Question! How heavy is that locket? o_o 'Cause it seems to be sitting quite comfortably and doesn't really appear to be being pulled down by gravity much. It just looks a bit off to me? *Shrugs* Depends on the chain, too. >.<;

There are a few pixels in the hair that *really* bug me. I think it's with the lightest color. Can you see them, or am I just obsessing? Also, the hair looks a little...almost washed out. I'd suggest going for more of a bright red, but that's more personal preference. :3 Anyway, looks really cool. xD The claw clip looks awesome, and I envy you for that shadow under her dress.
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Post by Rami » Thu May 14, 2009 6:18 pm

=D

I don't think freckles will take away from the face. If anything, it will add to the playfull-y feel of the girl...uh that makes no sense, does it...?

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