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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:47 am

I'm so proud ;u; He looks so freaking amazing, I love the hawk!
And the little jumpsuit on the small doll is very cute!

All you need to do now is shade under the hair and shirt c:


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:18 am

*feels accomplished* Woot : D
Lol I completely forgot about that, I'll go do that now XD
Now I need to find some w.i.p in the depths of my computer to put up or something : P

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With shading~ It was there the whole time. (lolnotreally) XD
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:46 pm

For some reason, I thought I had replied.

Huh. XD

Anyways, I look forward to whatever you manage to come up with! :D


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:22 pm

Sooo~ I finally finished this today : D
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I was starting to make another w.i.p but I have to go to class now : P
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Thu Jan 27, 2011 11:37 pm

B'aww! The hair is a little choppy, but the top has great folds!


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Thu Jan 27, 2011 11:49 pm

Ooh! Do you have some CC for the choppiness? : D And lol I'm glad you like it! I tried not to pillowshade this time around XD
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:05 pm

I really love the shirt. A lot.

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The red pixels I just added in because that strand was a bit awkward.

Hope this helps, sorry it was so late!


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:12 pm

Lol it's no problem at all! X] I'm usually late responding too, I mean there was almost a week I didn't respond on here cause of that whole Russia thing, so I don't mind at all [[:
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Also I'm so glad you like that shirt, and the left side of his hair : D lol!

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He looks so creepy but I'm pretty sure that's how my friend wanted him so X3 Here he is lol. I wanted to know what you think because I despise that jacket : P

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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:52 pm

He looks so much better!

I think the main problem with the jacket is the fact that the shadows indicate a lot of movement, whilst the bottom is pretty straight. So where there is highlights, the jacket should fold out a bit, and be slightly pulled back in the shadows.
I like the hood and I'm totally digging the smile though.

Something else that may help is that the boots look pretty glued to the pants, so making them maybe a pixel wider at least at the top may help. Right now they look like a pattern. They're also pillow shaded a little bit at the the bottom (:

Sorry about my late responses too XD I don't get on the computer as much as I used and I'm currently working on a steampunk costume 8D


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:09 am

No worries, I haven't had much time at all X3
Ooh, I'd love to see the steampunk costume or hear about it or something : P haha, it sounds awesome!
Also I totally know what you mean about the boots, they're totally irritating me X3 And I think I can fix the jacket, I just need better reference. Also, I was going to do the dolling pagent on Marl's page, and I was wondering if you could critique some things? : D
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:05 pm

Sorry for the long delay, my day basically consists of school, then homework and sleeping and then some tinkering on my costume.

I definitely plan to have pictures 8D

The only thing I would fix is on the collar, have more of the white colour as it looks rather dark compared to the sleeves and put a bit of shading on the skin beneath the sleeves, colour and hair. And a darker, little bit more definite line between the top lip and the bottom lip, just to put a bit of contrast in.

And maybe a bit of a halo of high lights on the hair, with only a pixel or two per strand?
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With the middle line in the lip kinda of there too.
K, maybe that wasn't only one thing XD but still, I quite like it.

Background looks absolutely fab too.

Is it going to be in tcp? XD my half-finishes port is sitting in the wips thread right now lol.


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:40 am

Lol yeah he was going to be for TCP : D I'm excited, with it being my first pageant and all lol, although I'm lacking inspiration to add to it.
I made this earlier for Dystopia:
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:38 pm

I remember my first and last (though soon to be changed) pageant I entered. I was so damn excited and then I lost all my inspiration and dropped out in the second round XD

The av looks greats, I like the soft colours and folds on the sweater.

More WIPs \o/
I can probably teach stuff too? I can try to teach anything that you would ever want to learn (:


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:14 pm

Lol yeah I don't think I'm honestly going to finish that one : P
I'm glad you like it : D
Teach me your awesomeness >:U lol, anything is good with me. I love learning. And challenges : D

Also a WIP:
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Basic colors filled, yatta yatta, just need to do shading and work out more of the kinks on the face. Base is Dystopia exclusive, with my edit X]

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They're all part of a shop I own on Dystopia XD But I really just had fun making them. The gas mask idea was spontaneous lol.
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Thu Feb 10, 2011 8:40 pm

Okay, I will go in order in my commenting 8D I feel like talking a lot, so my rambling will probably be long and boring but only because I'm avoiding doing a report 8D Its too bad about TCP, pageants are fun (: Unfortunately, I have no idea if I'm actually going to be entering either XD schools a bitch /o/

1. Yay Maps /o/ The hair is very flowy and I really like the shape. The face edit looks good, love the smirk, as does the hood. The only thing I suggest fixing is the piercings. Give them a bit of shine (or make the silver, I love silver <3 ) Oh and shading behind it, always works. I love piercings 8D I can't wait to see the hair and the sweater shaded.

numberpixelarts. Liquor \o/ they look very neat, I love the simplistic shading, it looks reallllyyy good. The gas masks look great too, I love the idea. The only thing I would suggest is upping the contrast in the black, you can't really see the wonderful details in the black masks as much as the yellowy one 8D

Anyways, as for whats next! Anything you've seen in any of my dolls I can probably teach. Or I can learn and then teach 8D


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Fri Feb 11, 2011 7:27 pm

I adore long comments <3
I added more to that one with only base colors : D Happy face, and lol I might continue on, I'm nto sure yet XD
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An entire doll dump! 8D
The first one is Semiazas, a demon character. I never bothered to finish his loincloth or finish his tattoos. He's a wip I found from a few months ago.
The one with the pants, I have no idea but I do know I love those pants and I edited his face xD
The blue haired one is Smitty. He's almost completed but I had an issue with his pants and gave up a while back lol.
The eye was random. It's watching you.
The brown haired one is part of a V-day present and recent. I never finished the folds on his sweatshirt and slapped a pattern over it. So basically, I need to redo that jacket XD
The moon was a random pixel background I started and never finished. There's no stars in that sky lol.
And the final one was a pagent entry I started and never finished.

Base credits in order they were talked about:
Fowo, Intangibledollz, Zipple/CCG, Baseless, Dystopia exclusive, Basless, and Apitchou (sp?)

...I still have to add the shine on the piercings XD
And I always adored how you made your hair look so soft, perhaps you could teach me that? : D lol
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:25 pm

Forgive me Gwen, for I have taken long to reply OTL XD

Semiazas looks badassss, I love his horns XD the loincloth has nice folds as well.
The-one-with-pants I really like, he's got attitude for sure XD The pants look great, the seams are an awesome touch.
I like the hair, but the shirt could use a little bit less dithered highlights. Perhaps take the lightest shade out? Or make it a little bit less contrast-y ?
O.O I feel watched *hides behind couch*
For the brown haired one, the hair looks awesome XD I suggest adding some shadows at the bottom and near the back, as well as upping the shadows on the sweater and its pattern.
Moon looks friggin awesome, as well as the would-be pageant entry.

I can do a full walk-thru with you with my method of doing hair, like in the workshops if you'd like.
For now though, I have this which might interest you. Its basically the steps in which I did to make my av, starting with the bump and then the left side then right side.

\o/ I promise I won't take as long as I did to respond ever again 8D


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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:41 am

Lol forgive you? Always. Besides, we're all busy here, I don't blame you. I disappeared there for a while too : P No worries <3
I love Semiazas, he's such a fun character. I still need to finish that loincloth XD That's a good idea actually, Smitty's shirt makes him look like he's wearing baggy Spandex, and it's really bad looking : P *takes out light highlights*
Oooh! That hair tutorial type thing was cool. It seems like a load of work, but you always make it look soft and fluffy x3 *loves on it*
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Hmm *thinks* I love practically all the dolls you do and yet somehow I have a hell of a time picking out something for you to teach me : P
Folds maybe? I didn't like the ones on Kelkore's shirt, so I'd love to learn how to fix it : D
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:19 pm

A LOAD OF WORK *falls over laughing*

Sorry, nobody has ever said anything like that for anything I've ever done omg XD not even stuff I actually put work into like school projects and shit XD
Also photobucket (the asshole) resized it so its kind of fuzzy which I didn't realize. But every step has only one shade added to it and each line is a new part of the hair. Also, most of my dolls have wavy hair which is just about the easiest to do with that style XD

For the dolls, lovin the pants and the mask on the first one but the contrast on the boots shading needs to be upped a bit.
The second one, the lower lip needs to be more defined as well as the pants need some tight folds, especially around the knees. The light source also doesn't match the one on the shirt. The shirt shading looks awesome, lovin the light source but the folds need to be more droopy instead of kind of being just pointy-down-like (dear god I am having the worst day with words XD) I like the shape of the little droop and the last fold. I would add a little bit of substance to the eyebrows and the necklace, with just a little smattering of lighter pixels, to make the eyesbrows look like real eyebrows (I spend 90% of my morning staring at my eyebrows, and they're one of my favourite things to pixel B) ) The laces on the shoes look awesome, but they shouldn't cast such a large shadow, just a small, really dark pixel or so line underneath them.
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I redlined this after I wrote all that text, so please bear with me. The arrow to the pants is just one spot where you could add folds. I would also love to see some highly contrasting dark shade in the back of the hair 8D
The braid on the last one looks fab, love the hair tie XD The shoes look painted on though and making them a pixel or two larger than the foot and maybe giving them a bit of a sole + heel. The shirt looks a bit pillowshaded, I suggest adding the slight lightsource that you've given to the pants as well. The pants look hella good, I would just shape the pattern a little, to follow the bent knee and the leg, it looks very slapped on. I would also add a really dark last shadow, just to the back of the ass to define it a little bit more, as well as the leg in back. The rest of the pants are lined darker, so the ass/back leg definitely should be a little bit lined too (though, make it slightly thicker and keep the other lines the same colour)

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You'll have to give me a little bit to do folds on an actual doll, its been such a long time since I've done folds, my av was the first thing I've finished since the beginning of last november, I believe.
Definitely look at references, they always have the most accurate folds XD I like sketching the folds on references and shit so I become more adept at placing them when I sketch in my designs. Just a suggestion though!

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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:27 pm

Lol that sounds fun x3 the running around with the plastic gun thing.
Also so much CC : D I love it! *rolls in it*
I knew there was something wrong wit Kelkore's shirt xD haha! I'm glad to finally knows what it is : P
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Excellent pokemon reference there as well : P LOL
Yesterday my brother locked me in the closet and proceeded to make cheesy jokes about 'you need to come out of the closet already'. Needless to say it was kind of funny but lame xD Then he forgot I was in there and left me there for a few hours. >:U
And no problem about the folds xD I personally suck at them but I don't try that hard to do them either : P I'll have to work on that!
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:16 pm

Aww, how did you live? I would hate being stuck in a closet, I'm sorta really claustraphobic XD

All the folds I've been doing lately have been on a teeny tiny scale XD I usually end up focusing on the hair and face edits 8D my favourite~!


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Postby Gwen » Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:42 pm

xCassx wrote:Aww, how did you live? I would hate being stuck in a closet, I'm sorta really claustraphobic XD

All the folds I've been doing lately have been on a teeny tiny scale XD I usually end up focusing on the hair and face edits 8D my favourite~!


It's sad I had to press quote to get the comment to FINALLY work. Ffffffff. Not sure why it didn't pop up, forever ago when I thought I posted, but yes it was scary xD Fricken closet.

Your dolls always come out great, folds or no xDD

And lol if you want to train someone else, feel free. I haven't been dolling much and I apparently completely failed on posting on this thread O_____o lol (I thought I did months ago.) But anyway, seriously don't let me take up your time O: If I need anything (I'll probably post here if it works xD), or even if you need anything- even if it's just to talk definitely PM me or something though (:
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Thu Apr 14, 2011 6:26 pm

TTuTT<3

Whenever you need me, I will be available<3

You've been a lovely trainee and made sense of all my ramblings.
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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby Gwen » Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:35 am

<3 And same to you, lovely mentor.
And lol you're the one making sense of my ramblings of my brother, and closets and so on. It's all good fun : D
I feel like I should post something here... it's too empty >: U
How about the beginnings of my steampunk entry?

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I forgot where the hell I put my other steampunk refs, but I have one on there lol
Any input you'd like to add so far is epic, but it's really nothing but a body/face edit for now. And a monocle (?). Cause those are awesome.

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Re: Dead By Cassssss

Postby xCassx » Wed Apr 20, 2011 8:28 pm

I am in loooove with that glass shading o:
Monocles are so awesome ;u;

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I hope you don't mind, I played around with it to see what I would fix.

First is the mouth, you have simply a very dark mouth line, with no lips. So I played around with it a bit, and then enlarged what I came up with. A promenant line in the middle, a dark lines at the sides and the bottom of the bottom lip and then some highlights on the bottom lip to demonstrate how it protrudes from the face. And then a little bit of shading on the top for a top lip.
Second, the eye has no/little shading in the white or the iris and has no indication of a pupil, unless you're going for really really really dark eyes and then it would basically look the same. BUT it still needs some contrast and a some reflection of the light source. So I drew you a really simply little diagram of an eye, showing where the highlights would end up, as ell as the reflection(depending on where the lightsource is; the reflection usually ends up somewhere in between the pupil and iris) and then some shading on the white with gray and a red colour, because eyes tend to be white with a little bit of red I find. Obviously it would be in a much smaller scale; thus, more contrast (:
Third, his arms seem to be a little bit short, lacking length in the forearms.
Fourthly, I added some AA to the third link in the chain, just to see if it would look a little bit less blocky. It's up to you ;)

I'm really excited to see what you come up with! Do you have a profession picked? (:

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