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Post by Mythfreak » Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:36 am

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Shading of the corset and the skirt are done, and i just need to finish the gaming system, shade her, and give her hair.

I really need help on that darn controller. It just doesn't look right. Any other help would be appreciated too.[/align]
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Post by FrizzKitty » Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:11 am

She looks good to me so far, except for one thing: is she sitting on her feet or to the side of them? The foot position suggests the latter but the thighs suggest the former. If it is the former, making the left foot a little more visible would imply that better, to me.
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Post by Mythfreak » Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:47 pm

thanks for pointing her foot out to me, and i edited it to show more, since she is siting on her feet.

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Post by batgirl » Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:35 am

the game controller is too vertical. when playing video games its typically almost horizontal.

skirt and corset look wonderful.
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Post by Wumpa » Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:50 am

I agree with Batgirl, the controller is just too vertical - it needs to be more horizontal. That's the "not looking right" thing you were talking about! XD

I love the shading on the skirt. That's gonna be a great gift, it's original, can't wait to see it!

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Post by Mythfreak » Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:21 am

Thank you both for the tips on the controller, and i think I've fixed it.

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I'm 99.99% sure this is finished, and just want to know if there is anything else i can improve on before i send it in.

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Post by Wumpa » Mon Dec 20, 2010 11:26 am

I'd add more contrast to the hair. The rest of it is awesome :D

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Post by LadyBuggyz » Mon Dec 20, 2010 3:20 pm

looks great :]
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