4 New Dolls

Isabella_GX · Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:28 pm Post subject: 4 New Dolls

Sorry I haven't been on in a while. Been workin' on these dolls for an art trade at deviantart Smile

These are titled Lilith.

Lilith 1

Lilith 2

Lilith 3

Lilith 4

Lemme know what you guys think Smile

Credits:

Character Credits- Riori
Base Credits for #1- Bonnie Wolf
Base Credits for #2- Mary-Chan
Base Credits for #3- Daevakun
Prop Credits on #1- CCCreations
Base Credits for #4- Lorelie

EmmyWemmy · Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:11 pm Post subject:

Hi there,

Looks like you've been busy.... I like the firsts layout, the whole thing looks quite cohesive...

Ave base can be found on my website.

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Isabella_GX · Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:51 pm Post subject:

thanks!! Do you have any ideas how I could improve?

Daenerys · Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:36 pm Post subject:

I like your colour choices, they are very vibrant.

For the first doll, I'd suggest something like shading the sofa where the doll sits. It kinda looks like she is stuck on there. If you shade under her behind and her legs, maybe on the seat and back of the sofa, it would feel more like she is really sitting on it.

Keep up the work.

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Isabella_GX · Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:39 pm Post subject:

Ahh, thank you!! Smile

Got anymore advice fer me?

nikdevid · Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 11:21 am Post subject:

Hi
I am Nik,glad to see you back with new Dolls, the four are looking amazing the colour you have choose i just amazing respectively.Well my favourite among the is the First and the last one.

tintenpatronen

zipple · Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 7:24 pm Post subject:

Watch how you're drawing clothes. They look pasted on. Fabric is thin but it still has some thickness. The outline of clothing, hair, etc, etc, should always be set a little thicker than the doll. Another part of it is because you're following the base shading and when you're dolling something that's not following the base exactly, you just seem lost. Look at some references if you need help, is all I can suggest for fixing this. Folds are folds, no matter if it's in a photograph or on a doll. Also, try to incorporate some details... and I'm not saying to draw on a million accessories but just little things like adding seams--something that doesn't compromise your vision of the doll but still adds interest.

Another suggestion: when you're dolling, try to think about how what you're drawing would work in real life so you can avoid visual contradictions. For clothes, ask yourself things like "How does the body affect the folds? How do props affect it? How does gravity affect it?" For example, on your first doll, the skirt looks very 2D because there's no back to it. It's just there, like she's not really wearing something that's wrapped around her. Along with that, even though the base arguably suggests that Lilith is sitting on the couch, the skirt doesn't seem to be affected--it's floating.

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Isabella_GX · Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:19 pm Post subject:

thanks for your adivce, I'm still working on figuring out where to shade lol, Smile

I'll take your advice into my.. messed up head, Smile